This is a short story I wrote about a year ago. It's one of my favorite less-than-10-page stories to date! Enjoy!
Crows
by Olive Tree
The birds came during late fall. The light was growing less, and rainy days were not uncommon. Eloise’s backpack grew steadily heavier as more and more textbooks were added to her load. Darkness was accepted, but the birds made everything change.
They came on a foggy Thursday, when clouds drifted down onto the horses’ fields and the road was slippery. The flock came down like a black swarm and perched upon the chain-link fences by the school. Ruffling feathers whispered a terrible secret into the still, silent air. Sharp beaks clacked and clattered like rattling bones.
The crows were here.
Eloise first noticed the crows as she was walking to the library after school. Hundreds of them were hopping over the wet grass of the football field. She shivered involuntarily. Why did I do that? she wondered. She shuddered again, this time of her own accord, and walked faster.
The crows were everywhere- on the top of the church steeple, on the hoods of cars. Everywhere. The whisper of their feathers and the rattling of their beaks filled the foggy atmosphere. Suddenly, Eloise noticed why the crows scared her so much. They don’t caw, she thought. Most crows I’ve seen have been making so much noise you can’t help but notice them. These you notice because they’re so quiet.
Finally she reached the library. Crows roosted here, too- on the roof, in the ancient maple trees. She slipped through the library doors and leaned against the wall, sighing in relief. She padded over to the checkout desk, where a librarian was stamping books.
“Have you noticed the crows?” Eloise asked her.
The librarian lifted her head. “What crows?”
“The ones outside. Haven’t you seen them?”
“No, dear. But there’s always crows about this time of year.” The librarian inked her stamp again and continued her work.
Eloise stayed at the library until seven. The librarian who had been stamping books earlier came over to where Eloise was doing her homework and tapped her on the shoulder.
“Everyone’s gone, dearie,” she said in a hoarse voice- almost like a crow’s caw. I’m just being paranoid, thought Eloise. “The library’s closing,” the librarian continued. She adjusted the spectacles perched on her beak-like nose. The beady black eyes behind the half-moon rims of glass glinted. Eloise noticed them with a shudder. Were those feathers on the librarian’s shawl? Black feathers...
“It’s time for you to go,” the librarian repeated. Suddenly she lifted her arms. Cloaked in her black shawl, the elderly lady looked exactly like a crow... ready to fly. “Time to go!” she cawed. “Time to go!” The librarian’s nose was extending into a full-sized beak, which clacked and clattered...
Eloise screamed and fled the library. As she burst through the heavy metal doors, she could hear the librarian cawing behind her... A flock of crows took flight as Eloise raced across the library lawn... Still they made no sound, only the beat of their heavy wings filled the air... Eloise’s thoughts were random, disconnected, and scattered. Home... Fast... She recalled that a group of crows was called a murder...
She burst in the door and shut it with a bang. She locked it quickly and backed into the living room. She collapsed on the couch and blacked out.
She awoke to see her mother bending over her. A soft halo of candlelight ringed her curly hair.
Eloise sat up quickly. Stars exploded in front of her eyes and she sank back onto the couch.
“Hey, honey,” her mother crooned. “The power’s out. What happened to you?”
“Crows!” Eloise blurted out. “Are they... are they here?”
“What crows, dear?” Her mother straightened up and pushed her curly auburn hair behind her ear. A shiny black earring hung there. Eloise smiled. It was probably one of her mother’s Halloween jewelry sets. A black cat, maybe? This small bit of normal life calmed her. Then her mother leaned in again and Eloise froze. It wasn’t a cat- it was a crow.
A tapping sounded at the window. Eloise’s eyes widened as her mother crossed over to it and flung open the curtains. A flock of crows were tapping at the glass. Small white cracks appeared in the glass.
“There, there, my little friends,” her mother whispered in the same crooning voice she used for Eloise. “We must wait for the others, my little friends. Wait just a little while more!”
Eloise backed up, dislodging the blanket that had lain on her lap. It fell in a heap on the floor like a pile of discarded feathers. She dashed out of the living room and raced into her room. With trembling fingers she locked the door and backed up against the wall. A rattling sounded at the window, and Eloise spun around to find more crows crowding outside her window, pecking. Spiderweb cracks spread across the pane. She shrieked and slammed the shade down. Her doorknob shook and clattered.
“Oh, no,” Eloise breathed. Of course, her mother had the key!
She slipped behind the shade and began opening the window. To stay inside meant the crows would be upon her in an instant. If she could get out, she might have a chance... She yanked the window up and the crows outside scattered. I have to get out fast, she thought. Already the crows were regrouping.
She streaked down Main Street, passing the library, the church. She took a turn to race past her school. The cloud of crows was growing closer. She glanced up at the sky. Was it day or night? She couldn’t tell, there was no sun or moon. The glance caused her to falter for a fraction of a second, but that was all the crows needed. They were upon her in a second. They swirled about her, and she though she heard snatches of voices- the librarian, her principal, her mother. The crows were spinning now, faster and faster... Eloise felt her face melting into a beak, feathers bursting through her skin... Her scream became a squawk, and her newfangled talons tore at the grass.
What had once been Eloise cawed triumphantly as she flapped upwards with the rest of the flock. Soon they would come to a new town. Their flock mentality urged them on, with only one thing in mind:
The flock must grow bigger.